We are learning to : make a descriptive writing piece about curious cove camp

The flying fox

It was like dropping then flying through the  air. Then a pole suddenly appears  but then out of know where  you slow down and go backwards to where you came from then forwards again which makes it feel like you will get stuck but then you go  back. Then  someone grabs the seat and you take the seatbelt off and jump out with a little bit of ground shock . you jump over the safety fence to go to the back of the line then they do a safety check and then the people down the bottom say to 2 guys at the top the safety checks and after each question the person at the top would say yes. The questions are. is the rope away? is the hook off? is the seatbelt on? Then the person down the bottom would say all clear. Then someone would yell BOMBS away the next person comes down like a rocket but and after that the child next in line would pull the rope down the hill which made the person look like super strong while they are pulling  the flying fox up to the top then the child would climb back up the stairs for the person In front of them to go down then it would be there turn. Then you would climb up the stairs and wait for your turn.

10 Lies about me!

I am learning to use capital letters at the beginning. I have highlighted the places that I forgot to use my capital letters!

1. I like swimming in rivers because my dad's a fish

2. my skin has a golden tan because my mum droped me in a pot of liqiud gold when i was a baby

3. i got a hole in my head is because when i was a baby my dad shot me in the head with a bb gun

4. i like playing games on computers is because when i was born my mum put a microchip in my brain

5. i like martial arts because my dad's jackie chan

6. i like reading books because i've got a bookworm in my head

7. i like pokemon because my cat nibbles is secretly snivy

8.the reason i have no eyebrows is because because my dad practices for his wax salon.